I'm really starting to enjoy description. Comparing and contrasting. Painting a picture so vivid that it jumps off the pages of the story. There's almost nothing like it. About to get to an action-ish scene; and let's just say, "It's about to go down!" haha
Thinking of ways to build the relationships in Drake's life. He can be a bit shallow at first, but there's a heart somewhere in there. I'm just picking away at it slowly, so it'll make sense when him and _____ get together. you're gonna have to wait and see who it is!
You are an incredibly fascinating writer Elias and I'm sure your parents are very proud of you. You write well beyond your years, which is why I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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